The cannabis industry might not be holding up good writing standards; the pr writer’s comments cover understanding what’s news, while also reducing the word count.
This one, a major embarrassment for Of Is and By fans, not only hides the sponsor’s identity—a tobacco company—but it also uses a record two passive voices in the lead, and 44 words are easily to 36. The first research finding is pretty sloppy too, with three word repeats in one sentence.
Today, with the assistance of @dantisch and the very impressive team @argylepr, I’ve entered a…
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It would be easy to say: what are they smoking but in addition to the word reductions, there are many extra words, redundancies and passive voices. Look how it can be cleaned up.
In this example, by applying a few basic PR Writer tips, a 25 per cent reduction is easily achieved. Yet it contains the same meaning.
Shortening news releases isn’t the only goal, making them clearer and more concise is an added benefit. In this release, the company the company made several grammatical, CP Style and punctuation errors, in addition to employing clichés and failing to emphasize the most important thoughts.
Lionsgate Films makes basic copy mistakes and PR Writer shows how to correct them. It’s decently well written though it makes basic mistakes. It can be much more more concise
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With the cannabis industry booming, there will be more news releases on the subject. To reach investor and consumer audiences, they need to be more concise. This one clearly could be made shorter, easily removing 46 words from its bloated 140 words. That reduces it 39 per cent to 94 words.