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Two passives in one lead, that’s a record: six ways to reduce 44 to 36 words

  • by rotmanprwriter
  • Posted on November 4, 2017May 28, 2019

This one, a major embarrassment for Of Is and By fans, not only hides the sponsor’s identity—a tobacco company—but it also uses a record two passive voices in the lead, and 44 words are easily to 36. The first research finding is pretty sloppy too, with three word repeats in one sentence.

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